Holy Spirit - Crown Point / Hebron, IN

Logo


FROM THE CLIENT Fr. Tom Mischler, Pastor at Catholic Family of the Holy Spirit
Good Morning Sam,

Yesterday I shared the logo design with the rest of the staff. The logo itself is getting fairly good reviews. Laura and I liked it a lot. What isn’t trending well is the over lay of the descriptor “of the.”
There is a growing consensus that place “of the” over Catholic Family make the overall logo look tight or forced, as if the words “of the” are being forced into a tiny space.

Is there room to unbunch all the words announcing who we are?

Just Curious, Fr. Tom
TO THE CLIENT Sam Lanning
Good Morning! I will work with the "of the" part and include that in the design for the homepage soon! I will spread out the words so they are better  represented as a whole! 

Thanks for the input! 

Samuel 
TO THE CLIENT Sam Lanning
With some meetings today and some updates to the logo and homepage I am hoping to have the proof finished some time tomorrow.

If you are available I would love to schedule a time for next Monday afternoon so I can show you the design and we can talk about the logo changes as well! 

Let me know what works for you, I will most likely send you the changes to the logo sometime tomorrow before we head to our company lunch. 

Thanks, 

Samuel 
TO THE CLIENT Sam Lanning
Good morning! Wanted to send this update the to spacing and colors on the Typography for the logo! Let me know what you think.